倒计时15天——18考研英语写作押题 多备几篇就真考上了!



倒计时15天——18考研英语写作押题 多备几篇就真考上了!缩略图

15. 成功是一座冰山
directions:
write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. in your essay, you should
1. describe the drawing briefly,
2. interpret its intended meaning, and then
3. give your comments.
you should write neatly on the answer sheet.

审题及提纲从图中各元素的联络启航分析这幅图像,其所传达的涵义就会一望而知。图像中,一座冰山横亘在海面上。冰山的一有些显露海面,而另一有些则躲藏在海水中。图中的文字理解地标明我们能看到的是阳光照耀下的代表成功的一有些冰山,看不到的却是海水下面我们在通往成功的途中,所阅历的奉献、尽力、绝望、牺牲等艰苦的进程。清楚明晰,图像用标志办法——冰山标志成功,引导我们如何理性看待成功。一方面,要知道到成功需付出非同一般的勤劳和尽力;另一方面,也要知道到并不是你情愿付出就能获得成功。需要留心的是,这篇作文虽较易下手,但却简略偏题。考生需发掘出成功的深层意义,切莫只对成功不和的艰苦打开单一论说。
第一段:描绘图像。图像的细节信息有:海面上的成功和海面下为成功付出的进程;我们能看到的表面和我们看不到的不和。至于“persistence”, “failure”以及“sacrifice”等都是影响获得成功的要素,大可不必逐个列出,选出至关重要的几项进行描绘即可。
第二段:提示涵义,充分延展。首要可点明主题,然后联络实际,并辅以名人事例,证明观念,照顾主题。段末可思考分析该表象发生的缘由。
第三段:总结谈论。引导我们如何客观理性地看待成功。

经典模板范文an iceberg marked with“success” stands on the sea, dazzling under the sunshine. however, under the sea are dedication, disappointment, hard work, sacrifice, etc., generally unknown to all.
the above picture reflects a common phenomenon that people are often attracted by the glory of success, instead of focusing on the hardships behind success. in real life, some people will be confused inevitably by visible success. actually, many people, on the eve of success, have undergone the sufferings hard to imagine, including some people of worldwide fame. for instance, though deaf and blind, helen keller finally became a famous writer and educator because of her firm belief, clear objective and constant efforts. thus it can be seen that it takes a great quantity of hard work and efforts to be successful. people are likely to be deceived by the iceberg illusion, mainly because of the unreality and impatience in the
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pursuit of success.
apparently, we should treat success objectively by making a breakthrough of mental iceberg. on the one hand, we should realize anyones success cannot be done at one go. on the other hand, we also need to know success comes not by being willing to sacrifice, but by striving for what we want most.
一座标明着“成功”的冰山矗立在海面上,在阳光的照耀下显得分外耀眼。而海面下则是一般不为人知的奉献、绝望、尽力、牺牲等要素。
上面的图像画映了一个广泛表象:我们常被成功的光环所招引,却忽略了成功不和的艰苦。在实际
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日子中,有些人会不可以避免地被表面看到的成功所利诱。实践上,许多人在没有成功之前,都阅历了常人难以愿望的苦痛浪费,其间包括一些世界名人。比方,尽管海伦·凯勒既失聪、又失明,但她遵循坚决的崇奉、清楚的方针和持续的尽力,究竟变成了闻名的作家和教育家。由此可见,获得成功需付出非同一般的勤劳和尽力。我们之所以很简略被冰山幻象所隐瞒,首要是因为在寻求成功进程中的不真实际和急于求成。
显着,咱们大约打破心思坚冰,客观地看待成功。一方面,要知道就任何人的成功都不是一蹴即至的;另一方面,也需知道到成功并不是咱们情愿去牺牲就能获得,而在于尽力寻求自个专心想得到的东西。
靓词靓语in the pursuit of 寻求
undergo v.阅历;饱尝
at one go 一会儿;一举
illusion n.假象;愿望
dazzling a.耀眼的,夺意图
dedication n.奉献,牺牲
glory n.光彩;光辉作用
make a breakthrough 有严峻打破或打开
靓句分析① however, under the sea are dedication, disappointment, hard work, sacrifice, etc., generally unknown to all.
本句可用来对图像细节进行描绘。两大亮点:(1)选用倒装规划,将介词短语“under the sea”置于句首,避免虎头蛇尾;(2)描述词短语“generally unknown to all”作伴随状语置于句末,弥补阐明。
② actually, many people, on the eve of success, have undergone the sufferings hard to imagine, including some people of worldwide fame.
本句可用于引出举例证明,一般是在该句后辅以具体的人物事例。文中以海伦·凯勒的比方来弥补阐明该句。本句先以介词短语“on the eve of success”作刺进语,又以介词短语“including some people of worldwide fame”对主语“many people”进行弥补阐明,一起,描述词短语“hard to imagine”作“sufferings”的后置定语,使句式富于改变。而且句末介词短语“including…”的运用为下文罗列人物事例做了极好的烘托。另外,“some people of worldwide fame”用非常规办法表达出“世界名人”的意义,泄显露作者小小的心计。简略的语句,却有着无比健壮的功用,考生们必定要善加学习!
③ on the other hand, we also need to know success comes not by being willing to sacrifice, but by striving for what we want most.
在叙说事物的两个方面时,咱们常用on the one hand,…on the other hand,…。这句话就是办法的另一方面。句中,“not…but…(不是……,而是……)”是作文中的常见句式,可是作者在其间套用了“by+doing”规划,指明获得成功的途径。句式前后对称,规整秀丽。
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